what do you think of my story its for a friend?

Question by god’s child: what do you think of my story its for a friend?
CHAPTER 20
After a 2 hour trip on the train everyone is home.Anna is home alone just like last summer.I walks in & up to my room. Being storng enough I pulled my trunk up too.Next day Anna is up and cooking. when the door bell rings. so I turn down the heat and wipe my hands. I open the door to find all 8 of my friends. ” Hey guys come on in”I say. so they come in and sit down. without saying a word. ” Anna can i ask you something?” asks Harry. ” Yea hold on ” I sayrunning to the kitchenand turning off the stove. i walk back out & sit on the couch with Jessica & Harry. ” So whats the question?” I ask. ” What is the turth of your child life?” asks Harry. so i explainto them that ” when Harry and I were born Lilly and James were only to take one child so they took Harry and i was put up for adoption.”
it took me forever to write all this down on paper page number 247 only on page of the 308 page story.
it took me forever to write all this down on paper page number 247 only one page of the 308 page story.
its just for fun and it may not make sense becase it chapter 20 you need to read 19 first which i did not type on here

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Answer by natwolff1217
I think it is very good. is it for a school project or just for fun?

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